commas

some people wonder what commas are this google drawing show what they are and when to use them

homonyms

some people wonder what homonyms are this google drawing shows what homonymous are.

metaphor

This is a poster crystal and I made about metaphor. It is to tell everyone how and when to use a metaphor  in there wiring. They are about greymouth.

reading challenge

blog post
title  all about me
blog  jordy
jordy post was about her  and what she likes  and how many  animals  we have  what she  likes  and what things  she like to do  and what her favorite things and what year she is.

reading challenge

study a author
author  kelly wilson
book mustang ride
kelly wilson  is a author that trains  wild horses and she lives in the north island

reading challenge

short story 
title  she'll be coming round the mountain 

is about a girl riding  horses around a mountain  and animals that are her friends  getting ready for when she gets back 

reading challenge

novel of your choice
title mustang ride
mustang ride  is about  three  sisters  that work with  wild  kaimanawa and they saved new zealand's wild  kaimanawa horses  the wilson sisters turn  to  the plight of america's wild mustangs. the wilson sister  names are  kelly,vicky and amanda

rock pool problem

All about me

descriptive writing

in ruma rima we had to do a descriptive piece of writing this is my piece of writing
and the words that are blue are the words i changed and added and down
below it is a example of descriptive writing

My planning

One penguin

One whale

running/walking

little/big/massive

                        The little blue penguin and the ugly whale

On a beautiful day and   hot day all the  penguin went swimming and one penguin Named Crystal  was a little penguin but split up from  the rest of  the group she went way out to sea where there was a enormous ugly whale name izaak out there to get  a penguin yum i'm sick of shrimp the whale said then the whale chested  crystal out of the water  but crystal was so fast and she got away and all the other penguins cheer for her l but the whale did not .Then later on the whale  got wash up on land and then the  whale died the next day but crystal live happily ever after

Once I saw him I knew… He was small, fragile  with  one  foot amputated.
 just standing there  gazing at me   for awhile on 3 feet  trying  to  keep  his balance  
and I could tell that  he remembered me.  

my long lost rabbit