Tuesday 2 July 2019

Persuasive Writing. Why I want to live in this house

I would love to live in this house because it has lots of land for all my animals and also there would be no wifi so it would make it more peaceful and just lovely to live in.

Firstly you would be able to have lots of animals like rabbits, horses, chickens, dogs, cats , donkeys , sheep, goat and ect because there would be no neighbours to complain about all your animals. Also if they got out or ran away they would not be taken by other people. Also your cats would not get run over by all the cars because there would be none. You could have 50 chickens and 10 horses and ponies also about 20 rabbits you would have heaps of grass and you wouldn't run out. You could also make hay in the summer.

Secondly, you would be able to build anything you wanted like another house , massive shed , barn , park, school, vet, animal shelters, zoos and more. Also you could have as many parties as you want to because you have no neighbors you could have a jet ski , boats and anything you wanted to have u could have such a fun time so would everyone else who would visit of live with you.

Thirdly, it has all of the things that you would want. There's no neighbours, lots of grass, the beach is close to your house and last but not least your children, grandkids, nieces and nephews would love this house to play and stay the weekend at. It would be warm and cosy at night and especially in winter when its cold.

Lastly but not least you could have all the gardens you want they would grow and grow you would have to go to the supermarket all the time you could grow fruit trees like avocados, cherries, apples, green apples and more. You could also grow flowers and veggies and other things like grain and wheat for cows and sheep and also so u can make bread. Also Its all natural so you wont get sick all the time you could easily

You should move into the house now because the best thing is that its isolation and there's no cars so it the perfect place for peace and quiet and also you could have all the gardens you want and they would grow and grow.

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By Jazmyn  

1 comment:

  1. Ki Ora Jaz,
    Thanks for sharing your writing. It is amazing to watch your writing develop. In this piece of writing I have noticed well constructed persuasive paragraphs.
    Cheers

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.